Card Set: Velocity Philosophy [VEPH]

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Re: Card Set Submission: Velocity Philosophy [VEPH]

Post by MysticJhn » Mon Dec 21, 2009 3:46 am

You still would have to win and rely on playing Normal Monsters for the most part.

Also, it only prevents the Summoning of Effect Monsters.
You can still Set Effect Monsters.
And Effect Monsters that are already on the field before the card's activation are uneffected, they were Summoned prior to it being played. It has no conditions to destroy monsters that are already on the field.
If they are flipped face-up without being summoned like by a card-effect or being flipped by battle, they technically aren't Summoned either.

What if I added the condition that there can onyl be 1 face-up "Golden Comminality" at a time?
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Re: Card Set Submission: Velocity Philosophy [VEPH]

Post by Aleva » Mon Dec 21, 2009 3:52 am

That condition won't do anything, because only an idiot would play two of them at once. I'd say just leave it and give it a limit.

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Re: Card Set Submission: Velocity Philosophy [VEPH]

Post by Arrowblaze » Mon Dec 21, 2009 4:20 am

Or you can just remove the first sentence and change it to allow Flip Summons.

An for Hawk, how about removing it from play to use its effect?

You suggestion makes me think about having something like "If this card is attacked destroyed by battle, you can remove it from play to add 1 Spell or Trap Card from your Deck to your hand."
Would that be good?

Yea. That would be fine.
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Re: Card Set Submission: Velocity Philosophy [VEPH]

Post by MysticJhn » Mon Dec 21, 2009 6:16 am

So then change it to say, "... Effect Monsters cannot be Normal or Special Summoned"?

That might work, I don't know.
I guess since most decks have zero Normal Monsters, denying them EVERYTHING is kinda one sided.
The person that plays that in a Normal Monster beatdown-style deck would have a huge advantage.

I gotta think about that.
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Re: Card Set Submission: Velocity Philosophy [VEPH]

Post by MysticJhn » Wed Apr 07, 2010 4:23 am

I just finished this set after gawd knows how long.

Someone look over my final 10 cards and then this set is complete.
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Re: Card Set Submission: Velocity Philosophy [VEPH]

Post by Aleva » Wed Apr 07, 2010 5:29 am

MysticJhn wrote:I just finished this set after gawd knows how long.
About 6 months or something. Not as long as EG.
Someone look over my final 10 cards and then this set is complete.

Card Name: Ryokubasuto!
Card Type: Spell Card
Card Text: Send a Zenith Material Monster that is listed on a Zenith Monster Card to the Graveyard, and Special Summon that Zenith Monster from your Extra Deck. During your End Phase, remove from play the Special Summoned Zenith Monster. Then Special Summon from your Graveyard the Zenith Material Monster listed on the card.
What does the name mean in Jap?

(For these Zenith Monsters, just make them Type/Fusion/Zenith so they appear in the Extra Deck, this is a whole new mechanic to the game. However, they will not work for effects that only effect Fusion monsters. If Zenith monsters are returned to the hand, they return to the Extra Deck, same as Synchro and Fusion Monsters.)

Card Name: Blue-Eyes Platinum Dragon
Card Type: Monster/Zenith/Effect
Attribute: Light
Type: Dragon
Level: 10
ATK/DEF: 3300/2800
Card Text: "Blue-Eyes White Dragon"
You can discard "Burst Stream of Destruction" from your hand to destroy all monsters your opponent controls. This card cannot be destroyed by card effects.
Looks fine.

Card Name: Wizard of Black Magic
Card Type: Monster/Zenith/Effect
Attribute: Dark
Type: Spellcaster
Level: 9
ATK/DEF: 2800/2400
Card Text: "Dark Magician"
By removing from play from your Graveyard 1 Spell Card, send 1 Spell or Trap Card on the field to the Graveyard.
Why not make it discard Dark Magic Attack?

Card Name: Pyro Swordsman
Card Type: Monster/Zenith/Effect
Attribute: Fire
Type: Warrior
Level: 7
ATK/DEF: 2100/1900
Card Text: "Flame Swordsman"
When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent equal to either the ATK or DEF of the destroyed monster, whichever is higher.
From Evil Hero Inferno Wing.

Card Name: Acrobat Monkey Borg
Card Type: Monster/Zenith/Effect
Attribute: Earth
Type: Machine
Level: 5
ATK/DEF: 1300/2100
Card Text: "Acrobat Monkey"
You can equip 1 Machine-Type monster on the field to this card. This card gains the ATK and DEF of the equipped monster. If this monster attacks a Defense Position monster who's DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage.
Only one can be equipped at a time? I mean..... DNA surgery says hi.

Card Name: Red-Eyes Onyx Dragon
Card Type: Monster/Zenith/Effect
Attribute: Dark
Type: Dragon
Level: 9
ATK/DEF: 2700/2300
Card Text: "Red-Eyes B. Dragon"
When this card is removed from play by the effect of "Ryokubasuto!", destroy all monsters your opponent controls who's ATK is lower than the original ATK of this card.
Nice. I like it.

Card Name: Hitotsu-Me Colossus
Card Type: Monster/Zenith/Effect
Attribute: Earth
Type: Beast-Warrior
Level: 6
ATK/DEF: 1500/1300
Card Text: "Hitotsu-Me Giant"
When this card attacks, during Damage Calculation only, this card gains half the ATK of the attacked monster.

When this card attacks, this card gains half the ATK of the attacked monster during Damage Calculation only.

Card Name: Ten Thousand-Eyes Idol
Card Type: Monster/Zenith/Effect
Attribute: Dark
Type: Spellcaster
Level: 3
ATK/DEF: 300/300
Card Text: "Thousand-Eyes Idol"
You can remove this card from play to flip all Set cards your opponent controls face-up (Flip Effects are not activated at this time). Send all Trap Cards flipped by this effect to the Graveyard and Set all Spell Cards flipped by this effect.
Set on your field or theirs? I assume its theirs. If it isn't, it should be.

Card Name: Bio-Tech Alligator
Card Type: Monster/Zenith/Effect
Attribute: Wind
Type: Machine
Level: 7
ATK/DEF: 2800/1900
Card Text: "Cyber-Tech Alligator"
When this card is Zenith Summoned, draw 1 card. If that card is a Machine-Type monster, draw 1 more card.

Card Name: Jerry Beans Warrior
Card Type: Monster/Zenith/Effect
Attribute: Earth
Type: Plant
Level: 5
ATK/DEF: 2050/300
Card Text: "Jerry Beans Man"
When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, add 1 Plant-Type monster with a Level lower than the Level of this card to your hand.
From Deck or GY?

Card Name: Shining Serpent
Card Type: Monster/Zenith/Effect
Attribute: Water
Type: Sea Serpent
Level: 10
ATK/DEF: 3200/3200
Card Text: "Spiral Serpent"
If "Umi" is on the field, you can Tribute 1 WATER Attribute monster you control to destroy 1 card your opponent controls. As long as this card is face-up on the field, "Umi" cannot be removed from the field by a card effect.
Looks fine.

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Re: Card Set Submission: Velocity Philosophy [VEPH]

Post by MysticJhn » Wed Apr 07, 2010 4:40 pm

Card Name: Ryokubasuto!
What does the name mean in Jap?

Nothing, really, it's two different Japanese words squished together, so it's something of nonsense as is.
The two words I used were ryoku (strength, power) and basuto, which I need to fix because I must have typoed when I looked it up, bucause basuto means bust, I thought it was burst. I'm going to switch it to kyuuzou, which means explosion, proliferation, surge.


It's basically describing a quick surge of power, at least I hope so. :D

Card Name: Wizard of Black Magic
Why not make it discard Dark Magic Attack?

Because I didn't want to basically copy Blue-Eyes Platinum Dragon's effect.

Card Name: Pyro Swordsman
Card Text: "Flame Swordsman"
When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, inflict damage to your opponent equal to either the ATK or DEF of the destroyed monster, whichever is higher.
From Evil Hero Inferno Wing.

1. I don't like Heros.
2. No piercing
3. Less cards needed to get it out.


Card Name: Acrobat Monkey Borg
Card Text: "Acrobat Monkey"
You can equip 1 Machine-Type monster on the field to this card. This card gains the ATK and DEF of the equipped monster. If this monster attacks a Defense Position monster who's DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage.
Only one can be equipped at a time? I mean..... DNA surgery says hi.

Yeah, or you can just make a Machine Deck.
The monster returns to little old Acrobat Monkey at the end phase, so it's not very abusable.


Card Name: Hitotsu-Me Colossus
ATK/DEF: 1500/1300
Card Text: "Hitotsu-Me Giant"
When this card attacks, during Damage Calculation only, this card gains half the ATK of the attacked monster.

When this card attacks, this card gains half the ATK of the attacked monster during Damage Calculation only.

What's the difference?

Card Name: Ten Thousand-Eyes Idol
Card Text: "Thousand-Eyes Idol"
You can remove this card from play to flip all Set cards your opponent controls face-up (Flip Effects are not activated at this time). Send all Trap Cards flipped by this effect to the Graveyard and Set all Spell Cards flipped by this effect.

Set on your field or theirs? I assume its theirs. If it isn't, it should be.

Notice the highlighted part. :|

Card Name: Bio-Tech Alligator
Card Type: Monster/Zenith/Effect
Attribute: Wind
Type: Machine
Level: 7
ATK/DEF: 2800/1900
Card Text: "Cyber-Tech Alligator"
When this card is Zenith Summoned, draw 1 card. If that card is a Machine-Type monster, draw 1 more card.

Again, what's the difference if it says "another card" or "1 more card"?

Card Name: Jerry Beans Warrior
Card Text: "Jerry Beans Man"
When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, add 1 Plant-Type monster with a Level lower than the Level of this card to your hand.
From Deck or GY?

If, When? Who cares?
And yes, I meant Deck, forgot to add that in.
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Re: Card Set Submission: Velocity Philosophy [VEPH]

Post by Arrowblaze » Wed Apr 07, 2010 4:51 pm

Card Name: Ryokubasuto!
Card Type: Spell Card
Card Text: Send a Zenith Material Monster that is listed on a Zenith Monster Card to the Graveyard, and Special Summon that Zenith Monster from your Extra Deck. During your End Phase, remove from play the Special Summoned Zenith Monster. Then Special Summon from your Graveyard the Zenith Material Monster listed on the card.

Send the Material Monster from where? Hand? Field? Deck?
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Re: Card Set Submission: Velocity Philosophy [VEPH]

Post by Aleva » Wed Apr 07, 2010 6:27 pm

Most of the things where I changed the wording, but with the same effect, are just OCG things.

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Re: Card Set Submission: Velocity Philosophy [VEPH]

Post by MysticJhn » Wed Apr 07, 2010 7:30 pm

Arrowblaze wrote:Card Name: Ryokubasuto!

Send the Material Monster from where? Hand? Field? Deck?
Changed to field.
Aleva wrote:Most of the things where I changed the wording, but with the same effect, are just OCG things.
Not really big issues, that's just nitpicking.
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Re: Card Set Submission: Velocity Philosophy [VEPH]

Post by EvilGod10 » Wed Apr 07, 2010 9:45 pm

ALeva likes the OCG to be perfect. I have tried to get him to change it but... well...
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Re: Card Set Submission: Velocity Philosophy [VEPH]

Post by MysticJhn » Thu Apr 08, 2010 1:19 am

Well, other than the OCG nitpicking, which has even been broken by Konami itself (anyone seen "This card has piercing"?), Are there any problems with this entire set?

Entire finished set up for review.
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Re: Card Set Submission: Velocity Philosophy [VEPH]

Post by EvilGod10 » Thu Apr 08, 2010 8:25 am

MysticJhn wrote:Well, other than the OCG nitpicking, which has even been broken by Konami itself (anyone seen "This card has piercing"?), Are there any problems with this entire set?

Entire finished set up for review.
Which card says that?
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Re: Card Set Submission: Velocity Philosophy [VEPH]

Post by Aleva » Thu Apr 08, 2010 9:00 am

Cyberdark Horn or whichever one it is.

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Re: Card Set Submission: Velocity Philosophy [VEPH]

Post by EvilGod10 » Thu Apr 08, 2010 9:12 am

lol, 1 time random Poop can't really be held against them can it.
They probably knew the card will neer be played so they thought, screw it, cbf doing it right, no-one is going to use it anyway.
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