Card Set: Renewal of the Past [RotP]

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Re: Card Set Submission: Renewal of the Past [RotP] - R/F Please

Post by Aleva » Wed Mar 10, 2010 1:25 am

What if i took away the first sentence? So you only get to see their hand once?

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Re: Card Set Submission: Renewal of the Past [RotP] - R/F Please

Post by EvilGod10 » Wed Mar 10, 2010 1:30 am

What about this.

You can switch control of this card to your opponent. This effect can only be used once while this card is face-up on the field. During the 4th End Phase after this card switches control, return it to its original owner. When control of this card switches, the new controller must reveal their hand. When your opponent activates the effect of a "Dark Scorpion" monster, a "Don Zaloog" or a "Cliff the Trap Remover" they control, your opponent can destroy this card on your side of the field and inflict 100 damage to your Life Points. The effect damage is treated as Battle Damage from the "Dark Scorpion" monster, "Don Zaloog" or "Cliff the Trap Remover" your opponent controls.
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Re: Card Set Submission: Renewal of the Past [RotP] - R/F Please

Post by Aleva » Wed Mar 10, 2010 1:32 am

Yeah, mine was the same thing, except instead of having "When control of this card switches, the new controller much reveal their hand." in it, I had this.

You can switch control of this card to your opponent to reveal your opponent's hand.

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Re: Card Set Submission: Renewal of the Past [RotP] - R/F Please

Post by EvilGod10 » Wed Mar 10, 2010 1:34 am

Yeah but it would be fairer this way. I mean, most of the time control won't switch back, but if it does it will be control fair that you reveal your hand as well.
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Re: Card Set Submission: Renewal of the Past [RotP] - R/F Please

Post by Aleva » Wed Mar 10, 2010 3:19 am

Is that the right OCG? I've checked my set already, so any wrong OCG now will be from changes like these. Unless its that Fish Assistant thing.

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Re: Card Set Submission: Renewal of the Past [RotP] - R/F Please

Post by EvilGod10 » Wed Mar 10, 2010 3:32 am

The change I made looks like it is correct, yes.
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Re: Card Set Submission: Renewal of the Past [RotP] - R/F Please

Post by Aleva » Wed Mar 10, 2010 3:34 am

K. Any other cards you need to fix?

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Re: Card Set Submission: Renewal of the Past [RotP] - R/F Please

Post by EvilGod10 » Wed Mar 10, 2010 3:35 am

I had a quick look over the rest of them, they seem alright.
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Re: Card Set Submission: Renewal of the Past [RotP] - R/F Please

Post by Aleva » Thu Mar 11, 2010 2:14 am

Cool. So if no one else has any problems, this is done.

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Re: Card Set: Renewal of the Past [RotP]

Post by EvilGod10 » Fri Mar 26, 2010 9:52 pm

I changed the effect of Cyber Dragon Drei. The effect is now,

When this card is Special Summoned, you can destroy 1 face-up monster your opponent controls. You can reveal 1 Monster card in your hand to treat this card's name as "Cyber Dragon" until the End Phase. This card's name is treated as "Cyber Dragon" while in the Graveyard.
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Re: Card Set: Renewal of the Past [RotP]

Post by Aleva » Fri Mar 26, 2010 10:14 pm

Meh.. I copied the sentence structure off Zwei, but I guess it doesn't matter.

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Re: Card Set: Renewal of the Past [RotP]

Post by EvilGod10 » Fri Mar 26, 2010 10:21 pm

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Re: Card Set: Renewal of the Past [RotP]

Post by Aleva » Fri Mar 26, 2010 10:22 pm

Oh. Looks like it got changed after I did it.

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Re: Card Set: Renewal of the Past [RotP]

Post by EvilGod10 » Fri Mar 26, 2010 10:23 pm

Yeah, it must have.
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Re: Card Set: Renewal of the Past [RotP]

Post by Aleva » Tue Mar 30, 2010 7:06 pm

Can you remove this topic from the Card Submissions board without harming the set? Akirus did that.

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