Card Set: Tribute to Odin [NMV]

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Re: Card Set Submission: Norse Mythology Set [NMV]

Post by schyshter » Fri Feb 06, 2009 12:03 pm

not gonna comment on the cards until you've updated the OP with the current versions; these walls of text are confuzzling :P

"Cannot be Tributed or used as Synchro material as they can't be sent to the GY. "

not true: you can use MACRO, D.D. FISSURE, BANISHERS...
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Re: Card Set Submission: Norse Mythology Set [NMV]

Post by bluebomber2425 » Fri Feb 06, 2009 12:03 pm

Jomsburg

looks perfect with that one sentence to be completely honest.

Ragnarok

I meant I highlighted it by mistake, its fine by me for now.

Slave Market

If you weaken the other cards I have no problem with this, my point is you can’t devastate your opponents graveyard and then have other deadly support effects. I have no issue with the card BY ITSELF.

Vulnerable Prey

………I rather it be 2000 atk or more or delete the special summon from hand, and its fine with me.


For the most part, it looks like some combinations of cards are too powerful

Reanalyzing the Valkryies…..ok they are ok, EXCEPT FOR ELUSIVE…..shes just too bloody powerful. Also I would rather have the 3 Valkryie effects only apply to Vikings. Actaully if you completely change its once per turn for Vikings its fine, otherwise its not.



In regards to the playstyle, YOU may see it as intending to be offensive, but if I were to play them I would abuse the fact that its difficult to remove them from the field without relying heavyly on spells, and that is my point.
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Re: Card Set Submission: Norse Mythology Set [NMV]

Post by paladin_of_shadows » Fri Feb 06, 2009 3:00 pm

Here's one you can add

Priestess of Freya

Spellcaster Syncro effect

lv 5 light att.

attack 1700 def 2200

while this card is in attack positition you may negate one attack from your opponent per turn, while in defense position you gain 300 lp for every "valkyrie" monster you control

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Re: Card Set Submission: Norse Mythology Set [NMV]

Post by Akirus » Fri Feb 06, 2009 3:15 pm

schyshter wrote:not gonna comment on the cards until you've updated the OP with the current versions; these walls of text are confuzzling :P

"Cannot be Tributed or used as Synchro material as they can't be sent to the GY. "

not true: you can use MACRO, D.D. FISSURE, BANISHERS...
I don't think Macro can Dimensional Fissure will work, the monsters first have to be sent to the GY so Valkyries will never full the first condition.

While this card is on the field, any card sent to the Graveyard is removed from play instead.

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Re: Card Set Submission: Norse Mythology Set [NMV]

Post by Akirus » Fri Feb 06, 2009 4:15 pm

I don't really see how it would be beneficial to make it defensive, please provide examples.

Recap with changes through discussion with Blue:

Card Name: Elusive Valkyrie, Mist
Card Type: Monster/Effect
Attribute: LIGHT
Type: Fairy
Level: 4
ATK/DEF: 1100/2000
Card Text: This card cannot be destroyed or sent to the Graveyard. This card cannot attack or be selected as an attack target. If a monster your opponent controls attacks, you can change the target to another monster you control. Once per turn during your opponent's Battle Phase, select 1 "Viking" monster on your side of the field. The selected monster cannot be selected as an attack target until the End Phase. If you control 3 "Valkyrie" monsters on your side of the field, monsters on your side of the field cannot be targeted by card effects. Return this card to your deck during your second End Phase after either player last declares an attack. You can only control 1 "Elusive Valkyrie, Mist" at a time.

Card Name: The Wild Storm Valkyrie, Kara
Card Type: Monster/Effect
Attribute: LIGHT
Type: Fairy
Level: 4
ATK/DEF: 1700/1400
Card Text: This card cannot be destroyed or sent to the Graveyard. This card cannot attack or be selected as an attack target. If a monster your opponent controls attacks, you can change the target to another face-up monster you control. Once per turn, if a "Viking" monster you control attacks, increase its ATK by 500 during Damage Calculation. If you control 3 "Valkyrie" monsters on your side of the field, if a monster would be destroyed by battle, you can destroy the other monster instead. Return this card to your deck during your second End Phase after either player last declares an attack. You can only control 1 "The Wild Storm Valkyrie, Kara" at a time.

Card Name: Valkyrie of Benevolence, Eir
Card Type: Monster/Effect
Attribute: LIGHT
Type: Fairy
Level: 4
ATK/DEF: 1500/1600
Card Text: This card cannot be destroyed or sent to the Graveyard. This card cannot attack or be selected as an attack target. If a monster your opponent controls attacks, you can change the target to another monster you control. Once per turn, if a "Viking" monster you control battles, you can reduce the Battle Damage to your Life Points to 0. If you control 3 "Valkyrie" monsters on your side of the field, reduce all Battle Damage to your Life Points to 0. Return this card to your deck during your second End Phase after either player last declares an attack. You can only control 1 "Valkyrie of Benevolence" at a time.

Card Name: Thorkell the Tall
Card Type: Monster/Effect
Attribute: EARTH
Type: Warrior
Level: 8
ATK/DEF: 3000/2800
Card Text: This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard except by the effect of "Ragnarok". This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 monsters on your side of the field. During your Standby Phase, Tribute 1 monster on your side of the field or discard 1 card from your hand. If you do not, this face-up card is sent to the Graveyard. Two times per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed. Battle Damage inflicted by this card is doubled. If this card is sent to the Graveyard while you do not control a "Valkyrie monster, remove it from play. This card is a "Viking" monster.

Card Name: Bear Berserker, Bjorn
Card Type: Monster/Effect
Attribute: EARTH
Type: Warrior
Level: 6
ATK/DEF: 2800/0
Card Text: This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard except by the effect of "Ragnarok". Twice per turn, if this card would be destroyed by battle, it is not destroyed. When this card declares an attack, it must attack all monsters on the field once each. Battle Damage inflicted by this card is doubled. During your third Standby Phase after Summoning this card, reduce its ATK by 500. If this card is sent to the Graveyard while you do not control a "Valkyrie monster, remove it from play. This card is a "Viking" monster. -omitted

Card Name: Viking Seawolf Raiders
Card Type: Monster/Effect
Attribute: EARTH
Type: Warrior
Level: 6
ATK/DEF: 2500/1900
Card Text: This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard except by the effect of "Ragnarok". If you declare an attack with this card, discard 1 card from your hand. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can select 1 Spell or Trap card on your opponent's side of the field and set it face-down on your side of the field. During your End Phase, return this card to the bottom of your deck and Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase. If this card is sent to the Graveyard while you do not control a "Valkyrie monster, remove it from play.

Card Name: Viking Berserker
Card Type: Monster/Effect
Attribute: EARTH
Type: Warrior
Level: 4
ATK/DEF: 2400/0
Card Text: This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard except by the effect of "Ragnarok". This card can only be Normal Summoned by returning all "Viking" monsters on your side of the field to your deck while your opponent controls at least 1 monster. Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed by battle, it is not destroyed. When this card declares an attack, it must attack all monsters on the field once each. During your second End Phase after Summoning this card, return it to your deck and Special Summon 1 "Viking Axeman" or "Viking Mercenary" from your hand or deck. If this card is sent to the Graveyard while you do not control a "Valkyrie monster, remove it from play.

Card Name: Viking Captain
Card Type: Monster/Effect
Attribute: EARTH
Type: Warrior
Level: 4
ATK/DEF: 1900/1600
Card Text: This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard except by the effect of "Ragnarok". All "Viking" monsters on your side of the field gain 300 ATK and DEF except this card. If this card is sent to the Graveyard while you do not control a "Valkyrie monster, remove it from play.

Card Name: Viking Mercenary
Card Type: Monster/Effect
Attribute: EARTH
Type: Warrior
Level: 4
ATK/DEF: 1500/1500
Card Text: This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard except by the effect of "Ragnarok". Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can pay up to 2000 Life Points to have "Viking Mercenary" gain ATK equal to that amount until the end of your opponent's next turn. During your opponent's Main Phase, your opponent can discard 2 cards from their hand to take control of "Viking Mercenary". If this card is sent to the Graveyard while you do not control a "Valkyrie monster, remove it from play.

Card Name: Viking Axeman
Card Type: Monster/Effect
Attribute: EARTH
Type: Warrior
Level: 4
ATK/DEF: 1850/1800
Card Text: This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard except by the effect of "Ragnarok". If this card is sent to the Graveyard while you do not control a "Valkyrie" monster, remove it from play.

Card Name: Masterful Shipwright
Card Type: Monster/Effect
Attribute: EARTH
Type: Warrior
Level: 1
ATK/DEF: 300/300
Card Text: Once per turn, you can add 1 "Viking Longship" from your deck or Graveyard to your hand for each face-up "Viking Captain" on your side of the field +1.

Card Name: A Good Deal
Card Type: Spell
Card Text: Return 1 "Slave" monster on your side of the field to its owner's deck. Draw 2 cards. - currently discussing

Card Name: Amanita Muscaria
Card Type: Spell
Card Text: Return 1 "Viking Axeman" or 1 "Viking Mercenary" to the bottom of your deck to Special Summon 1 "Viking Berserker" from your hand or deck.

Card Name: Legendary Stronghold Jomsburg
Card Type: Spell/Continuous
Card Text: Once per turn, you can discard 1 "Viking Longship" from your hand to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Viking" monster from your deck.

Card Name: Ragnarok
Card Type: Spell
Card Text: Halve your Life Points and return all face-up "Valkyrie" monsters on your side of the field to the bottom of your deck to destroy all cards on the field. Then Special Summon as many "Viking" monsters from your Graveyard as possible. During the End Phase of the turn you activate this card, remove from play all cards on the field, in your hand and in both Graveyards.

Card Name: Viking Longship
Card Type: Spell/Quick-Play
Card Text: Return 1 "Viking" monster to the bottom of your deck. Special Summon it during your next Standby Phase.

Card Name: Viking Slave Market
Card Type: Spell/Continuous
Card Text: When an opponent's monster is destroyed by battle by a "Viking" monster, instead of sending it to the Graveyard, take control of the destroyed monster. Its name is treated as "Slave". Its ATK and DEF become 0, its level is reduced to 1 and its effect is negated. When this card removed from the field, destroy all "Slave" cards on your side of the field.

Card Name: Vulnerable Prey
Card Type: Trap
Card Text: If your opponent controls an ATK Position monster whose ATK is less than 2000 or a DEF position monster whose DEF is less than 2000, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Viking" monster from your hand in ATK Position. Then draw 1 card. If you draw a "Viking" monster, Special Summon it on your side of the field in ATK Position.


Still needs a lot of work, I'm probably going to have to introduce some new supports as well since so much of it was removed.

"If a monster your opponent controls attacks, you can change the target to another monster you control." - Valkyrie effect. Should this be changed to once a turn?

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Re: Card Set Submission: Norse Mythology Set [NMV]

Post by schyshter » Fri Feb 06, 2009 5:18 pm

Akirus wrote:
Card Name: Thorkell the Tall
Card Type: Monster/Effect
Attribute: EARTH
Type: Warrior
Level: 8
ATK/DEF: 3000/2800
Card Text: This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard except by the effect of "Ragnarok". This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 monsters on your side of the field. During your Standby Phase, Tribute 1 monster on your side of the field or discard 1 card from your hand. If you do not, this face-up card is sent to the Graveyard. Two times per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed. Battle Damage inflicted by this card is doubled. If this card is sent to the Graveyard while you do not control a "Valkyrie monster, remove it from play. This card is a "Viking" monster.

Card Text: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 3 monsters on your side of the field or by the effect of "Ragnarok". During your Standby Phase, Tribute 1 monster on your side of the field or discard 1 card from your hand. If you do not, this face-up card is sent to the Graveyard. Two times per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it is not destroyed. Battle Damage inflicted by this card is doubled. If this card is sent to the Graveyard while you do not control a "Valkyrie monster, remove it from play. This card is a "Viking" monster.


Card Name: Bear Berserker, Bjorn
Card Type: Monster/Effect
Attribute: EARTH
Type: Warrior
Level: 6
ATK/DEF: 2800/0
Card Text: This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard except by the effect of "Ragnarok". Twice per turn, if this card would be destroyed by battle, it is not destroyed. When this card declares an attack, it must attack all monsters on the field once each. Battle Damage inflicted by this card is doubled. During your third Standby Phase after Summoning this card, reduce its ATK by 500. If this card is sent to the Graveyard while you do not control a "Valkyrie monster, remove it from play. This card is a "Viking" monster. -omitted

reduce ATK to 2300 or increase its Level...

Card Name: Viking Captain
Card Type: Monster/Effect
Attribute: EARTH
Type: Warrior
Level: 4
ATK/DEF: 1900/1600
Card Text: This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard except by the effect of "Ragnarok". All "Viking" monsters on your side of the field gain 300 ATK and DEF except this card. If this card is sent to the Graveyard while you do not control a "Valkyrie monster, remove it from play.

Card Text: This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard except by the effect of "Ragnarok". All other "Viking" monsters on your side of the field gain 300 ATK and DEF. If this card is sent to the Graveyard while you do not control a "Valkyrie monster, remove it from play.

Card Name: Viking Mercenary
Card Type: Monster/Effect
Attribute: EARTH
Type: Warrior
Level: 4
ATK/DEF: 1500/1500
Card Text: This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard except by the effect of "Ragnarok". Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can pay up to 2000 Life Points to have "Viking Mercenary" gain ATK equal to that amount until the end of your opponent's next turn. During your opponent's Main Phase, your opponent can discard 2 cards from their hand to take control of "Viking Mercenary". If this card is sent to the Graveyard while you do not control a "Valkyrie monster, remove it from play.

Card Text: This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard except by the effect of "Ragnarok". Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you can pay up to 2000 Life Points to have this card gain ATK equal to that amount until the end of your opponent's next turn. During your opponent's Main Phase, your opponent can discard 2 cards from their hand to take control of "Viking Mercenary". If this card is sent to the Graveyard while you do not control a "Valkyrie monster, remove it from play.

Card Name: Masterful Shipwright
Card Type: Monster/Effect
Attribute: EARTH
Type: Warrior
Level: 1
ATK/DEF: 300/300
Card Text: Once per turn, you can add 1 "Viking Longship" from your deck or Graveyard to your hand for each face-up "Viking Captain" on your side of the field +1.

Card Text: Once per turn, you can add 1 "Viking Longship" from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand.

Card Name: Viking Slave Market
Card Type: Spell/Continuous
Card Text: When an opponent's monster is destroyed by battle by a "Viking" monster, instead of sending it to the Graveyard, take control of the destroyed monster. Its name is treated as "Slave". Its ATK and DEF become 0, its level is reduced to 1 and its effect is negated. When this card removed from the field, destroy all "Slave" cards on your side of the field.

Card Text: When an opponent's monster is destroyed by battle by a "Viking" monster, instead of sending it to the Graveyard, take control of the destroyed monster. Its name is treated as "Slave". Its ATK and DEF become 0, its level is reduced to 1 and its effect is negated. When this card removed from the field, destroy all "Slave" cards on your side of the field. A monster destroyed by this effect is Special Summoned to its owner side of the field.

Card Name: Vulnerable Prey
Card Type: Trap
Card Text: If your opponent controls an ATK Position monster whose ATK is less than 2000 or a DEF position monster whose DEF is less than 2000, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Viking" monster from your hand in ATK Position. Then draw 1 card. If you draw a "Viking" monster, Special Summon it on your side of the field in ATK Position.

Card Text: If your opponent controls an ATK Position monster whose ATK is less than 2000 or a DEF position monster whose DEF is less than 2000, Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Viking" monster from your hand in ATK Position. You can then reveal the top card of your Deck. If the revealed card is a Level 4 or lower "Viking" monster, Special Summon it to your side of the field in ATK Position. Any other revealed card is removed from play.
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Re: Card Set Submission: Norse Mythology Set [NMV]

Post by Akirus » Fri Feb 06, 2009 6:14 pm

Card Name: Bear Berserker, Bjorn
Card Type: Monster/Effect
Attribute: EARTH
Type: Warrior
Level: 7
ATK/DEF: 2800/0
Card Text: This card cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard except by the effect of "Ragnarok". Twice per turn, if this card would be destroyed by battle, it is not destroyed. When this card declares an attack, it must attack all monsters on the field once each. Battle Damage inflicted by this card is doubled. During your Standby Phase, reduce the ATK of this card by 200. If this card is sent to the Graveyard while you do not control a "Valkyrie monster, remove it from play. This card is a "Viking" monster.

Does this work?

I'm gonna take you up on all the suggestions. Check OP for all updates.

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Re: Card Set Submission: Norse Mythology Set [NMV]

Post by paladin_of_shadows » Fri Feb 06, 2009 6:46 pm

An alternative would be that instead of going to the graveyard all "viking" monsters that are destroyed by battle go back into the deck, if they are destroyed by other means they go to the "Cold lands" or out of play. It actually jives more with the whole viking theme, ragnarok could be used to summon vikings from the first ten cards on the top of your deck, or something similar, as it is that combo you have now is waaaay too broken

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Re: Card Set Submission: Norse Mythology Set [NMV]

Post by paladin_of_shadows » Fri Feb 06, 2009 6:51 pm

You know that you also gotta have Niddhogg in there somehow

card name Niddhogg

type dragon/effect/ syncro?

attribute water, or dark

level 8

2700/2000

when this card destroys another card in battle you can special summon 1 monster from your hand or deck with attack equal to or less then the destroyed monster

or another useful effect someone comes up with

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Re: Card Set Submission: Norse Mythology Set [NMV]

Post by bluebomber2425 » Fri Feb 06, 2009 6:56 pm

paladin_of_shadows wrote:You know that you also gotta have Niddhogg in there somehow

card name Niddhogg

type dragon/effect/ syncro?

attribute water, or dark

level 8

2700/2000

when this card destroys another card in battle you can special summon 1 monster from your hand or deck with attack equal to or less then the destroyed monster

or another useful effect someone comes up with


change it to viking, and thats actually a well built card imo.


on a side note I like Scys changes, still miffed at Valks
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Re: Card Set Submission: Norse Mythology Set [NMV]

Post by paladin_of_shadows » Fri Feb 06, 2009 7:00 pm

I read too many dang asatru books

magic card

name: Bow of Cherbernog

equip card

you can only equip this card to a monster with viking in its name, the selected monster gains 200 attack. once per turn you may destroy one spell or trap card on the field

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Re: Card Set Submission: Norse Mythology Set [NMV]

Post by paladin_of_shadows » Fri Feb 06, 2009 7:09 pm

nother one

Spell card

name: Culculane (its a legendary axe, like excalibur)

equip card

this card can only be equipped to a "viking" monster while equipped the selected monster gains 500 attack, If the monster this card is equipped to destroys an opponets effect monster they recieve 300 damage to their life points

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Re: Card Set Submission: Norse Mythology Set [NMV]

Post by Akirus » Fri Feb 06, 2009 7:25 pm

Well, in the idea, the GY = Asgard/Valhalla, so you should be able to piece it together.

Paladin, you have a lot of good ideas, maybe create your own Viking support set (same archetype). We could work together on this to make a coherent archetype, I just don't want to incorporate them all into one set because I'd rather you get recognition/credit for your work. Hit me up if you're interested.

Blue, I thought you said you were good with the Valkyries?

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Re: Card Set Submission: Norse Mythology Set [NMV]

Post by paladin_of_shadows » Fri Feb 06, 2009 7:28 pm

sure, I got too much imagination for my own good anyway, and like I said I read too many fantasy norseish history type books, so I got a lot of background in mythologies and .....stuff

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Re: Card Set Submission: Norse Mythology Set [NMV]

Post by Akirus » Fri Feb 06, 2009 7:34 pm

Did a search for the artifacts you mentioned in Wiki, didn't find anything. Could you link me some sources?

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