Yu-Gi-Oh! Monster Evolution

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Yu-Gi-Oh! Monster Evolution

Post by Chahine Bond » Sat Apr 02, 2016 2:17 pm

This is a fan-made manga i've started working on few times ago
http://yugiohme.smackjeeves.com/comics/ ... -chaotics/
Subject: Yei Tisumi, a 18 years old duelist whose skills are limited, upset towards that, she decides to enhance her own skills with her own will and efforts, however, once she got engaged in a duel with Melissa, things have changed for her, by obtaining a new power, she aimed at trying to master that power, as well, getting better in Duels.
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Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Monster Evolution

Post by LewieGee » Sat Apr 02, 2016 9:47 pm

It's pretty nice - there's a lot of work gone into this. I was pretty engaged. it was nice to see drawings of things like Qliphort Killer and Gale Dogra.

I mean, there's a lot of sort of teenage profanity and huge chests, but eh, it's not as if that was absent from manga anyway...
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Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Monster Evolution

Post by Chahine Bond » Wed Jul 06, 2016 4:00 pm

He he thanks, i like to depict some irl cards too, besides cc. :p
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Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Monster Evolution

Post by dracostrike » Wed Jul 06, 2016 4:04 pm

Not what I was expecting, but the comic style really does suit it ^^
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Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Monster Evolution

Post by Chahine Bond » Wed Jul 06, 2016 4:13 pm

Well trying my best to make it as close as manga-ish. However, carving for thoughts on the story. .3. ;p
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Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Monster Evolution

Post by dracostrike » Wed Jul 06, 2016 4:21 pm

Well you know the usual way to read manga is right to left though, right? Just a thought.

The speech bubbles and thought bubbles look fine along with good annotation from the effect sounds ^^ SLAAAM!

As to the story.....the sudden death over card game is a little, just a little, over the top...
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Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Monster Evolution

Post by Chahine Bond » Wed Jul 06, 2016 4:32 pm

For the style, yeah, i just chnged that starting from chapter 8. ^^; I wasn't very comprehending the style of manga, until i read Urusei Yatsura to get myself used to it.
The thing about Sudden death, yeah i intended Chaotics to have psychic effects regrading their horrific and Gorry theme, then later i toned it down with sealing into cards.
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Post by dracostrike » Wed Jul 06, 2016 4:59 pm

Sounds like you are learning fast ^^ Good luck and keep posting!
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Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Monster Evolution

Post by Chahine Bond » Wed Jul 06, 2016 5:07 pm

Yeah thanks, i'm about to update this any time soon.
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Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Monster Evolution

Post by dracostrike » Thu Jul 07, 2016 1:13 pm

All teachers must know Rulings! XD

Looking far better than the start of the series
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Re: Yu-Gi-Oh! Monster Evolution

Post by Chahine Bond » Thu Jul 07, 2016 2:03 pm

dracostrike wrote:All teachers must know Rulings! XD
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Well yeah.
dracostrike wrote:Looking far better than the start of the series
Glad you like it =p.
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