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I felt inspired to write something...

Post by Zanrith » Sun Apr 05, 2015 11:38 pm

I'm on break, so I might have the change to finish this little short story i'm writing. I felt inspired to write this when I was talking with a friend about Tier 1 civilizations. And yes, there's dragons. Why wouldn't there be?
It's a different writing style then i've written in before, so I hope you readers out there enjoy. Would appreciate all feedback any feedback on this thread, thanks!
Here's what I've written so far:
[spoiler]They called themselves gifts of the stars. And why wouldn't they be? They wore the bodies of their prey, but had the souls of alpha predators. Intelligent, although conservative, they held onto older ways, rather than encouraging innovation and change. Who likes change, anyway? Change is the death of customs and ways of the old, the wise, the ancient, the honored, the trusted, the coveted, the successful. This is what they believed, how ironic it may be to other beings they would find, who would thrive on innovation and change. Those ever busy humans on their wasted and exhausted planet, starving for the balance it once had in its billion year life. But that is the tale of change, and it was not one the gifts of the stars, or precdiskien (Pronounced Pred-Ski-En). Some of them had accepted their kind had not found all that was possible in their world, and had learned to move accross lands to worlds unseen before. This is how the story of Antarlia begins, whose thirst of knowledge brought him to a world seen by few of his kind, Earth. He had not known it then, but he would soon find the meaning of his life, and change many other's lives.[/spoiler]
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Re: I felt inspired to write something...

Post by Zanrith » Tue Apr 14, 2015 12:36 am

hmm, no comments? Shame, I would have posted more by now.
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Re: I felt inspired to write something...

Post by DemonicLancer » Tue Apr 14, 2015 2:42 am

I actually like it, plz write more

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Post by Rowwdy Yisb » Wed Apr 22, 2015 2:00 am

Dis sick AF, im fining u £1,000,000 if u dont update
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Re: I felt inspired to write something...

Post by jwestbro11 » Sun May 03, 2015 6:57 pm

Looks pretty good will defiantly keep reading
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Re: I felt inspired to write something...

Post by Lithium » Mon May 04, 2015 7:30 pm

You ever gonna update this?
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Re: I felt inspired to write something...

Post by Zanrith » Mon May 04, 2015 8:43 pm

Yeah. Need time to write.
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