Ej1997 - Gaia's Deep Freeze

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Ej1997 - Gaia's Deep Freeze

Post by Ej1997 » Fri Jul 19, 2013 4:22 pm

So excited to be posting this. Mostly Spellcaster support :)

Ok here are the monsters :)

[spoiler]Guard of the Master

Lv 3
Dark
Spellcaster/Effect
1000/2000
Flip: This card cannot be destroyed this turn. If this card would be banished: Banish one card from your graveyard. When this card is destroyed by battle equip it to one level 7 or higher Spellcaster. If the monster this card is equipped to would be destroyed: Destroy this card instead.[/spoiler]

[spoiler]Elemental Master Sieg Hart

Lv 7
Light
Spellcaster/Effect
2700/1000
When this card is normal summoned banish one card from your opponents graveyard. While this card is one the field you may choose one monster you control. Your opponent cannot target any other card on the field for attack or card effects.[/spoiler]

[spoiler]Sorcerer of Destruction
Lv 4
Dark
Spellcaster/Effect
1900/200
When this card is destroyed by battle or by a card effect: Destroy one card your opponent controls.[/spoiler]

[spoiler]Magician of Wonders
Lv4
Water
Spellcaster/Effect
1800/300
When this card is normal summoned target one Lv 4 or lower Spellcaster type monster in your graveyard: If this card is destroyed by battle while in attack position special summon that card from the graveyard.[/spoiler]


Spell Card Support :)
[spoiler]The Ancient Tomb
Spell Card Field

When this card is activated discard one Spellcaster Type Monster from your hand. Once per turn you may activate one of the following effects:
•Increase one Spellcaster Type Monsters attack by 1000 till your next end phase
•Destroy One Spell/Trap card your opponent controls
•Select one card you control; It cannot be removed from the field till your end Phase
Once per turn if a lv 7 or higher Spellcaster would be destroyed banish this card instead.[/spoiler]
[spoiler]A Magician's Duty
Spell Card Quick Play

When an opponent’s monster with 2700 or more atk is summoned. Special summon one Spellcaster from the graveyard in defense mode. It's effects are negated and it cannot be destroyed by battle this turn.[/spoiler]


Of course a little bit of Generic Stuff
[spoiler]A True Sacrifice
Trap Counter
When two or more monsters you control are destroyed: Special Summon the monster with the lowest level.[/spoiler]


[spoiler]A Lords Oath
Spell card
After this cards activation when three monsters you control on the field have been destroyed: Draw two Cards. Then Banish one of those monsters.[/spoiler]


And a little bit of Anti Scalies
[spoiler]A True Hero
Trap
Target one monster you control: It gains 1000 attack and Any Dragon type monster your opponent controls must battle that monster.[/spoiler]
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Re: Ej1997 - Gaia's Deep Freeze

Post by dedoombringer » Fri Jul 19, 2013 4:43 pm

Wonders: give a level restriction and remove once put duel
Tomb: until you end phase not next end phase
Sacrifice: level restriction so bosses dont come back that easy

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Re: Ej1997 - Gaia's Deep Freeze

Post by Ej1997 » Fri Jul 19, 2013 5:22 pm

I edited Wonders so it can only target Lv 7 Monsters

also edited Sacrifice t target the monster with the lowest level.

I'm still iffy on touching tomb though. I sort of wanted it to be for the defensive maneuvers for lower atk monsters.
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Re: Ej1997 - Gaia's Deep Freeze

Post by dedoombringer » Fri Jul 19, 2013 5:33 pm

No we don't want bosses back that easily. And with Tomb as is there will never be a reason for defense because your level 4's well beat most boss monsters.

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Re: Ej1997 - Gaia's Deep Freeze

Post by Ej1997 » Fri Jul 19, 2013 5:57 pm

Fixed the effects. Wonders now only can Target lv 4 or lower monsters. I'm also interested to here what you think of Seig Hart and Magician's Duty
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Re: Ej1997 - Gaia's Deep Freeze

Post by dedoombringer » Fri Jul 19, 2013 6:11 pm

Duty is very situational and something I will think more on
Seig is interesting but looks like it could be abused, I will look at these closely.

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Re: Ej1997 - Gaia's Deep Freeze

Post by Promo06 » Sat Jul 20, 2013 6:10 am

Everything looks fine to me.

Approved.

That being said, A Lord's Oath needs a bit of TLC.

Its just worded poorly and a bit hard to understand.
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Re: Ej1997 - Gaia's Deep Freeze

Post by Promo06 » Sat Jul 20, 2013 6:10 am

Everything looks fine to me.

Approved.

That being said, A Lord's Oath needs a bit of TLC.

Its just worded poorly and a bit hard to understand.
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Re: Ej1997 - Gaia's Deep Freeze

Post by Ej1997 » Sat Jul 20, 2013 9:16 am

Think I fixed the Wording on A Lord's Oath
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Re: Ej1997 - Gaia's Deep Freeze

Post by dracostrike » Sat Jul 20, 2013 10:48 am

Destruction needs to be toned down slightly:

He can be activated by your own effects (you can add other people's generic cards which which do).
And his Atk is too high for that kind of effect.
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Re: Ej1997 - Gaia's Deep Freeze

Post by The Stranger » Sat Jul 20, 2013 2:53 pm

For the record, aside from the things you submitted last set, you only have 1 space to make spellcaster support.
I believe you are fine right now because everything you've posted in this thread was also posted in the original discussion.
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Re: Ej1997 - Gaia's Deep Freeze

Post by Promo06 » Sun Jul 21, 2013 3:41 am

Also, A true Sacrifice requires a bit more there in its effect.

Where is it summoning from, is it summoning only monsters that were just destroyed, etc, etc.
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Re: Ej1997 - Gaia's Deep Freeze

Post by dedoombringer » Thu Aug 01, 2013 3:09 pm

Tomb: first effect is to strong, try 500 also the effect should end at you end phase not carry over their turn and your next.

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Re: Ej1997 - Gaia's Deep Freeze

Post by dedoombringer » Tue Aug 13, 2013 2:53 pm

You need to fix these if you want them submitted, also one spoiler for all the cards is better.

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Post by Promo06 » Wed Aug 14, 2013 6:10 pm

I approve all, and 1-3 spoilers is preferred.
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