Yusei-oh - War of the ancients

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Yusei-oh - War of the ancients

Post by yusei-oh » Wed Aug 28, 2013 7:44 pm

let's start this off with a few card's I've already made.
[spoiler]Land Lady of the Forest
:earth:
:star2: :star2: :star2: :star2:
xyz/Beast/effect
3 Level 4 "beast-warrior" type monsters
Attack/2000 Defense/1500
when this card is Xyz summoned send it's materials to the graveyard. Once per turn, when this card declares an attack, select the targeted monster for an attack, attach it to this card as Xyz material and take damage equal to the difference between this cards ATK and the attached monsters ATK. once per turn, when this card would be destroyed (by battle or effect) you can detach 1 xyz material from this card instead.
Anti-hero's grudge
:trap: :normal
during the end phase, if you took damage this turn, you can special summon 1 anti or Byronic monster from you deck who's level is equal to the ammount of damage you took that turn X 1000.
Hatred's Toxin
:spell: :sField:
when ever you pay life points to activate an effect (except this cards effect), you opponent must also pay half of what you pay or place 1 card from their Hand, Field, or Graveyard on the bottom of their deck, they cannot shuffle, add a card(s) from their deck to their hand, or draw a card(s) (except during their normal Draw Phase) until their next main phase 2. during each of your end phases, you must pay half your life points or banish this card.
Byronic Underdog
:dark:
:star:
Warrior/Tuner
Attack/500 Defense/500
once per turn, During either your main phase 2 or your opponents battle Phase, you can pay 500 life points to Special summon this card from your graveyard. you can only activate the effect of "Byronic Underdog" once per duel. Once per turn, this card cannot be destroyed by battle.

Generosity of a Stranger
:spell: :sQuick:
when you would Pay Life Points to activate the effect of a "Anti-Hero" or "Byronic" card, you immediately gain Life Points Equal to what you paid. You can only activate the effect of "Generosity of a Stranger" once per turn.

Anti-Hero Angel
:light:
:star: :star: :star: :star:
Fairy/effect
Attack/1800 Defense/1500
when this card is sent from the field to the graveyard, you can add 1 "Byronic" or "Anti-Hero" card from your deck to your hand.

Anti-Hero, Beast of Revenge
:dark:
:star: :star: :star: :star: :star: :star:
Beast/Effect
Attack/2200 Defense/1500
if your opponent controls a monster and you control no monsters, you can special summon this card from your hand. Once per duel, if your opponent controls a monster and you control no monsters, you can special summon this card from your graveyard by taking effect damage equal to the combined attack of all your opponents face-up attack position cards. if the special summon of this card from the graveyard succeeds, increase the attack of this card by the amount of damage you took from this effect.[/spoiler]
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Re: Yusei-oh - War of the ancients

Post by Lord dragon » Wed Aug 28, 2013 8:00 pm

yusei-oh wrote:let's start this off with a few card's I've already made.

Land Lady of the Forest
:earth:
:star2: :star2: :star2: :star2:
xyz/Beast/effect
Attack/2000 Defense/1500
when this card is Xyz summoned send all of its materials to the graveyard. Once per turn, when this card declares an attack, attach the targeted monster to this card as Xyz material and take damage equal to the difference between this cards ATK and the attached monsters ATK. once per turn, You can detach 1 Xyz material from this card to activate the detached monsters effect. when this card would be destroyed (by battle or effect) you can detach 1 xyz material from this card instead.
Very concerned. Can absorb any monster, and can absorb multiple. Protection from destruction. Generic materials(assumed). and can use the monsters effect.

Anti-hero's grudge
:trap: :normal
during the end phase, if you took damage this turn, you can special summon 1 anti or Byronic monster from you deck who's level is equal to the amount of damage you took that turn X 1000.
pretty sure I know what you meant here, but badly worded

Hatred's Toxin
:spell: :sField:
when ever you pay life points to activate an effect, you opponent must also pay half of what you pay or place 1 card from their Hand, Field, or Graveyard on the bottom of their deck, they cannot shuffle or take cards from their deck (except normal Drawing) until their next main phase 2. once per turn, this card cannot leave the field.
by Normal Drawing you meant Draw Phase? This card is WAY to much, it stops all Speed for your opponent without hindering you in any way

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Re: Yusei-oh - War of the ancients

Post by yusei-oh » Wed Aug 28, 2013 8:23 pm

Fixed*
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Re: Yusei-oh - War of the ancients

Post by Lord dragon » Wed Aug 28, 2013 10:31 pm

yusei-oh wrote:let's start this off with a few card's I've already made.

Land Lady of the Forest
:earth:
:star2: :star2: :star2: :star2:
xyz/Beast/effect
3 Level 4 "beast-warrior" type monsters
Attack/2000 Defense/1500
when this card is Xyz summoned send it's materials to the graveyard. Once per turn, when this card declares an attack, select the targeted monster for an attack, attach it to this card as Xyz material and take damage equal to the difference between this cards ATK and the attached monsters ATK. once per turn, You can detach 1 Xyz material from this card to activate the detached monsters effect. once per turn, when this card would be destroyed (by battle or effect) you can detach 1 xyz material from this card instead.
Drop the protection, or make it all materials. Opponents turn only


Anti-hero's grudge
:trap: :normal
During your end phase, if you took damage this turn, you can Special Summon 1 "Anti" or "Byronic" monster from your deck who's level X1000 is equal to the total damage you took.
during the end phase, if you took damage this turn, you can special summon 1 anti or Byronic monster from you deck who's level is equal to the ammount of damage you took that turn X 1000.
Just a suggestion on wording


Hatred's Toxin
:spell: :sField:
whenever you pay life points to activate an effect, you opponent must also pay half of what you pay or place 1 card from their Hand, Field, or Graveyard on the bottom of their deck; they cannot shuffle, add a card(s) from their deck to their hand, or draw a card(s) (except for their Normal Draw during the Draw Phase) until their next main phase 2. During each of your end phases, you must pay half your life points or banish this card.
forgot to highlight the changes, but they are there.


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Re: Yusei-oh - War of the ancients

Post by Promo06 » Wed Aug 28, 2013 11:03 pm

Land Lady is just way too much.

Her effect is so scattered.

i'd make it not gain the opponent's effect. Instead just let the slow stealing of opponent's monsters turn your Land Lady invincible :D
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Re: Yusei-oh - War of the ancients

Post by dedoombringer » Thu Aug 29, 2013 1:50 pm

Land lady is nutz, what aboit something like this:
When this card destroys a monster in battle you can equip the monster to this card (max 1 monster equipped). While you have a monster equipped to this card by it's effect you can detach one material monster and send the equipped monster to the graveyard to give this card the equipped monsters effect until your end phase.

Also please spoiler so they can go directly to what they want to read instead of scrolling through a wall of text everytime.

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Re: Yusei-oh - War of the ancients

Post by yusei-oh » Thu Aug 29, 2013 6:30 pm

thank you, and noted Doom.

But I want to keep landlady's effect the way of " when this card is Xyz summoned send it's materials to the graveyard."
But I think I'll remove the "effect" thing and just make it able to eat other monsters, and detach to prevent destruction.
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Re: Yusei-oh - War of the ancients

Post by yusei-oh » Fri Aug 30, 2013 5:28 pm

3 more.
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Re: Yusei-oh - War of the ancients

Post by dedoombringer » Fri Aug 30, 2013 5:49 pm

Underdog self revive from grave should be once per duel.
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Re: Yusei-oh - War of the ancients

Post by yusei-oh » Fri Aug 30, 2013 7:38 pm

sounds good
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Re: Yusei-oh - War of the ancients

Post by dedoombringer » Sat Aug 31, 2013 12:46 am

Looks like you fixed them all.
Revolution note: we dont really spoiler individual cards also when you add more people usually look to the OP for what cards you have made.

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Re: Yusei-oh - War of the ancients

Post by Promo06 » Wed Sep 04, 2013 3:34 am

Approved all.

Put all in one spoiler at top of page.
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Re: Yusei-oh - War of the ancients

Post by dedoombringer » Fri Sep 06, 2013 4:13 pm

Second approval here, like Promo said please spoiler all your card into the op. Once the submission thread is made you can move your cards there.

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Re: Yusei-oh - War of the ancients

Post by yusei-oh » Mon Sep 16, 2013 2:52 pm

added one monster card. more to come later.
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